Rhetorical Moves

I keep thinking about my project 3 and I'm pretty sure my next move will be to use more active verbs. I will try to engage the audience and to make my paper more interesting at the same time. Right now my paper is in passive voice to refrain from offending the audience. Instead of offending, though, my paper is boring them and so turning them away. In just changing around my sentences and naming my focus, I will enliven my essay and make reading my oppposing views fun.